EDIT: Read this! I don't want to see more comments implying rule 34. That isn't what this is, or is meant to imply, all that's going on here is some major intimidation.
And here's some food for thought: look at the bottom of Gilda's chestpiece. If she leans down, it'll kill RD. Yeah. Not any rule 34 going on here, just a major decision for Gilda to make about what to do with her old friend, whether or not to let her live... /EDIT
Based off of the final moments of Chapter 4 of my fanfic! [link] This is pretty much the turning point in my story where the big overarching conflicts start in this epic struggle
Gilda finally reunites with Rainbow Dash... And she's in the Avian Special Forces.
And she's pinned Dash down.
This happens in my fanfic Does Rainbow Dash survive this attack? How does Gilda respond? What happens next!? You'll have to read my fanfic to find out (Muahahaha) Here's the link: [link]
If you think the tears are a bit much, well, she's just been ambushed sorta, and tried to get up, only to realize she's really pinned for good (those are sharp claws holding her down at every limb!), and then there's the roar in the face.
You'd have to be an idiot to think you're not dead at that point.
But, it's all in Gilda's hands claws, now. What will she do with her old "gal pal"?...
Note to art thieves: This is protected by a secret security system. If you take this, you will be found out. Try it, punk. Make my day
Vectors used: Rainbow Dash lying down [link] by Rainbow's shocked expression [link] by , and modified by me.
While you're here, why not take a look at my growing astromares series [link] ? Or an extremely popular piece of mine that made it on Equestria Daily! [link]
You have no idea how wonderful, and confidence-boosting it is to hear that as a writer!
I'm thinking of splitting it into two stories: one more focused on Gilda and Tura, and the other more focused on the space program, but the two would be co-lateral, meaning it's basically the same story, just written from two different points of view, and one exposes the story of EASA more, and the other exposes Gilda and Tura more.
yeah I think your right splitting it into two stories would be great, so you can here the story from two sides. Because personally I think it would be more interesting sometimes readers may get bored with just one side of the story.
I also love writing but the kind of stories I do are really different. Nice Job
Lol, yeah, that's why I decided to do it. I was wondering why it wasn't doing so well, when I suddenly realized: This is probably an awful disappointment for readers looking for a space story, you know, like the cover picture and it's name? Lolol!
Lol, yeah, ultimately I'm optimistic, and at some level I think it should all be in the spirit of the show, at some level.
You're welcome - and I apologize this splitting is taking me so long. I'm basically writing two whole new stories, and have to make them independantly interesting, flow, yet be based on the same series of events, lol. Quiet a challenge, but working out surprisingly well
yeah and ya know when I write if I don't like my story so far I just give up and do something else. DO NOT DO THAT! I have never in my life finished a whole story well I have gotten really far but when I say story I mean like one that could be published not fan fic.
You have no idea how wonderful, and confidence-boosting it is to hear that as a writer!
I'm thinking of splitting it into two stories: one more focused on Gilda and Tura, and the other more focused on the space program, but the two would be co-lateral, meaning it's basically the same story, just written from two different points of view, and one exposes the story of EASA more, and the other exposes Gilda and Tura more.
I think it'd work better that way. Thoughts?
I also love writing but the kind of stories I do are really different. Nice Job
Lol, yeah, ultimately I'm optimistic, and at some level I think it should all be in the spirit of the show, at some level.
Thanks!